NothanyTPM's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Solace: In Mind]

I like everything about this animation, but I only have one gripe:

Sometimes the animation has a really low frame rate, like Powerpoint levels of low. For background elements like crowds of people I don't mind, for the main character it's a bit distracting, but the flower petals that flow in the wind are really distracting. Especially by the end where you have some smooth animation with the characters mixed with the flower petals going at 1fps.

It's really nitpick-y, but I understand that this is a really low budget animation, and corners need to be cut somewhere.

[Super Schmack Bros]

You know, I thought this would have been another one of those "sexy parodies" I see from time to time with P-Bot, but I'm glad it wasn't.

I like it!

[Front Page Feels]

Great little animation! Still haven't had a single thing front paged yet, but I always dream of the day where it will finally happen.

Buster98 responds:

You've got this!

[Shiver and Frostbite - Chill Vibes]

Nice little animation. The character animation did repeat a little too much and I never knew what the guitar strums were synced to, but what's there is still really good and I like the music.

[Merry Merry Christmas And A Happy New Horizons]

I wasn't expecting a video like this, but it gave me a big-ol' smile on my face the whole way through.

[Zack and Alex: Pilot Episode]

Your animation style is very strange. It's very rough and primitive looking when going frame-by-frame, but the movement is so fluid like it was done professionally. You really know how to stretch those expressions to the point where it really felt like a classic hand animated cartoon!

And unless you were going for this "child crayon drawing" look, I'd suggest playing around with different brushes to see what would fit these characters, and even play around with drawing nature and basic 3D shapes to get those backgrounds looking less flat.

All and all, you've got amazing talent (and I kind of envy you)! Just keep doing what you're doing and you might be unstoppable.

TheJayShow responds:

Yes, it would be good to experiment with different brushes, or just general better line quality. Thanks a ton for your feedback!

[happy birthday johnny utah]

...I don't get it...

[HIGHER (Small AMV)]

Short, sweet, rough on the edges, but still wholesome. Reminds me of something I'd see on Flipnotes.

It's hard to say something like this without accidentally stabbing an artist's emotions, but I know you can do great things, you just need to continue drawing/animating to get out of the rough.
And don't worry, getting-out of the rough is something every artist needs to do at first (myself included).

Toxitoxus responds:

Hey thanks for watching!

This was actually a reupload from youtube 7 months ago but figured i'de reupload it here, to this day i can see many things i need to improve so i appreciate your comment

And i always appreciate Feedback so no need to worry that i'll be offended :D