NothanyTPM's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Snake Predator Fang (Supercell Make)]

TFW your quick sketches has better posing than the final piece.

Not to say that you final piece is bad, just a little stiff compared to the quick sketches you did in your reference image.

[COOL!]

Cool beans!

[An Unforgettable Trip - Pico Day 2023]

Love the art, but I've got to say: the perspective on that floor makes it look like that one scene in Inception where the floor rises up to turn into a wall.

Always had a knack for perspective, so it's kinda hard to teach other what it is. Best advice I can give is
>practice drawing backgrounds by using photos as references (liminal spaces have got you covered there)

>drawing cityscapes (those are basically just a bunch of large cubes with windows)

>using something like a square mat under your feet when you're taking body references in order to get an idea of where the perspective is on your character (can get tricky depending on the type of lens you're using since some tend to warp the image a bit more than others)

>And I've heard people using Minecraft to construct their environments. Since it's so easy to build things in Minecraft and the cubes makes perspectives easier to find.

Hope that wasn't too much of a mouthful. Always love seeing people improve at the things they like

Chuw-Croissantier responds:

Thanks Noth!

I'll take note of that (specially i'll try with Minecraft, im curious on how that works lmao)

[ACHIEVEMENT GRINDING (GIF)]

Akchievements

[Experiment!!]

She drank the Breast Embiggenment Juice!

[Cool oc's from Cool people]

My boy is here!

[Deep Sea Prisoner - Chapter 1 PT2]

Neat little comic you've done so far. It's not my kind of story though (not your fault. I just feel like I see these high-school stories a little too often), and I also don't like giving any critiques when it comes to stories...it's never a fun time, and it always ends in a disaster.

I will say that you've done a good job at laying down the rules for your world. I've seen a few where they just expect you to know the rules of the world, and that's a confusing mess.

I only have two little gripes: one is that the perspective is a little wonky in the hallways, but that'll get fixed the more you practice.

Two is that the text needs to be a little more consistent in the text bubbles. And by consistent I mean that you need to try and fit the bubble around the text, and not the other way around. Without going "full teacher mode" it's best to keep the text in the individual bubble as uniform as possible, and only deviating from that when you want to express a certain emotion.
[IE: small fonts = whisper or shyness, big fonts = angry or yelling, compressed/italic fonts = nervous or talking really fast, etc...]

It makes it both easier to read, and really pops when you want to exaggerate an emotion. It's also good to plan-out the panels so that you can maximize the amount of text in the bubbles without erasing part of the background that you really liked.

Hope this wasn't too much of a read for you, and I don't really want to discourage you from making the stuff you like because the only way to get better is through practising...for better or for worse.

Chuw-Croissantier responds:

Ain't reading allat -laughing emojis- OH NO YIX POSSESED MY MIND A

Jokes aside thank you for the feedback!

also yeah backgrounds were planned but i changed them in the last minute soooo it feels more of improvisation than other thing (in fact... was a bad idea lmao) but welp, thx to you i have a clear path on what i have to do next (also using better fonts and stuff lmao) sooo don't be afraid to give any feedback, all the feedback you give i apreciate it and helps me to imrpove even more!

[nap]

WTF?! 50 MIN?!

Damn dude, did you take a few lines before painting this 'cause that's insanely fast for something this good!

My only critique is the cat anatomy is a bit wonky, but at the same time...you did this in less than an hours, and pretty much everything else is spot-on.

Kyontara responds:

I’m kinda speedy, most of my work takes me under an hour lol
Also in my defence I kinda draw baby animals like blobs lmao, ik proper cat anatomy I just like to be silly! I appreciate the critique tho! Ty!!!

[none pizza with left beef]

It was probably Seymour Buts

Tamag0 responds:

HEY EVERYBODY! I WANT A SEYMOUR BUTZ!!

[mari]

I like it. What drew me to it were the nice colours...which is funny because most of your stuff has this muted colour palette that I don't like as much. Makes it feel like I have my brightness all the way down.

Just my opinion though, the rest of your drawing are all well made.